^NICE SPITTENS
BUt heres the heat
an ya shit looks like a prewrite,
just a bunch of meta4s u cuda copyed an pasted from another site
an how u gunna say im a vet, this is my first battle..but ok

an change of rules since u took 5 hours to post kid
10-25 lines
max
checkin
plus i spitt short bars
u spit long bars





but wuteva

yo mic check


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Ya entered the battle thinkin you'd dispose of me but chose to be ripped fast//
supposedly ya got skill,I'm not thrilled,I drop ill and give ya whip lash//
decapitate ya bitch ass,once I dispatch my Konceptz and leave ya lid twisted//
this kid insisted to get verbally fisted,ya shoulda just bit the shit that CHRit did//
ya had one shot but missed it,now ya listed as another victim of my viscious blows//
I'm so fuckin cold my lines'll paralyze ya mind and leave this bitches wishes froze//
with descriptive flows,its my mission,to cause a collision and seperate ya neck and head//
super imposin this foe,show em I'm the best,and disconnect his intellect instead//
collect ya dreads,once I peel ya cap back so far that it reveals ya spine//
leavin a trail of weak emcees,when I proceed to rhyme it's like I'm sqeezin a 9//

switch up style

Such a shame, you rookie, you retired so quick//
Retirement’s for the successful, but you aint nice, so you quit//
Feeling alone, cuz you were never as tight as some of your peers//
You stopped netceeing; I thought you could only retire from a career? //
Jamaal you ain't no pensman, I'm a fucking savage the discrepancy between weak and mediocre//
I'm gonna be the one to end ya streak.. Your chances of beatin me are like a FAG in a game of 'straight' poker//Ouch
I clown but i i aint no joker..Cuz ya skillz bouta be jacked like armed-robbery//
THis kid only got Played punches..so ill leave this VEteren shook like Muhammad Ali//

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