aigh't break it down. talon man u got some talent with flow, ur all part was flowin well and ur structure was tight, rhyme scheme was pretty good and u had alot of nice multi's but what was lacking from ur part I thought was some wordplay, there's wasn't to much to it just basic wordplay and everything was pretty straight forward but u came hard with some nice vocab and that made up for it. crazy B, ur flow was a bit choppy, lost it here and there and ur rhyme scheme was kinda hard to pick up at some parts, structure coulda been a bit stronger to, and it could use some better vocab, there were a few tight multi's in there though.
but all in all good piece guys. keep droppin an elevate. peace.

oh and if u 2 got the time check out mine and masta C's two collabs "Hight Times (feat.Masta C)" and "High Times *The Sequel* (feat. Masta C)" and leave us some feedback. muchly appreciated. thanx in advance.

oh and both of u's if ur lookin to join up in a crew go and try out for Corrupted Visions I got the link to the thread in my sig. hope ta see u 2 there. peace.

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