aight, this was waay to short, only 4 bars.

I'm not gonna hate or anything, cos i've been here, everyone has been at this stage, heres some tips to help you:

1.
Choose a subject that you can relate to directly. I speak alot about the troubles over here [N.ireland], i can relate to that directly, so it mkaes it easy to write about, and when i do write about it, it come sout with real passion and feelin'. Thats what you need to do, find something that you have really emotion about and simple write..

2.
Increase your vocab. Try to sue at least one descriptive word a line, as you elevate you'll see the importance of it, and it will become easier to accomplish this. But don't go over the top, don't come out with a line like:
These Problematical Rhymes, Burn Intensely Like Precarious Uranium Ores...
The Words Personify My Cavernous Feelings, Indignitly Exposing The Sores... - too much vocab there, keep it simple, yet complex.

3.
Structure out your song, Make it
Verse 1: 10/11 lines
Hook: 4 or 6 lines
Verse 2: 16/18 Lines
Verse 3: 14 lines..
I've got a good tutorial on structure in the tutorial forum.

These ar eonly some simple things to help you elevate, learn about Worpdlay, meta's and Internals etc... Post some topic in the WEC and get some good advice, Keep droppin' them dawg!