Was nice, i was reading this to 'pac's "Whatcha Gonna Do", few simularities. The flow was dope, and it's dope when you know what the beat is.

Try to get more rhymes outta the words [i know it's been said already], i usually try to get 3 or 4, then move on, but sometimes using 2 is cool. Also the vocab was, well NOT simplistic, but could have been more complex, but "Whatcha Gonna Do", didn't splash out on the vocab so..you know.

Hook was dope, corresponded nicely to the original, gave out a nice message as well. Gonna give this a 3/5 overall, was nice but could have sued some improvements..keep it up dawg.