alright to break it down. flow was a little choppy at some parts, u had some good multi's and some ok wordplay. I liked the topic. could use a bit more vocab and u had an alright structure. all in all nice drop for startin out keep elevatin. peace.

if u got the time check out mine and masta C's collabs called "High Time (feat. Masta C)" and "Hight Times *The Sequel* (feat. Masta C)" and leave some feedback. thanx in advance. peace.

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