this was a fine piece, with good wordplay, and felt emotion.

even thou everything seemed to be all coming at once, so many emotions, you still worded it out could and kept it in order, but still emtions shine through.

the word plays that you had it this you good. they added alot to this piece, brought it up.

the line that i liked best was the simply put line:

When time has grieved and Love has cried

it all fit so well, and flowed nicely. did a good job keep more coming!

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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