i liked this piece, it seemed peaceful but a the same time the message was franctically in a hurry, and strong, not very peacefull.

im not sure if ive understood the whole intent of this, but it seemed more of i thought this over and over before i wrote piece, giving it maybe a little bit wisdom. dunno. it might be because of the relaxed feelign i get reading it, but it still has a strong effect.

it flowed nicely, and the words fit. the structure is a common, but it didnt take away from the piece.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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