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Old 10-29-03, 04:51 PM   #6
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yo, again this was another amazing drop everything about it was on point.
immagery
On the lone road I inhale magic in my Prone Throat
And watch Demons Dance in the mist of my Blown Smoke


nice internals
Its funny, how I close my Eye's but my Mind Travels
And Rides Camels past the line of Sub Real Animals


nice multis
I touch the pen, my weapon for surviving this earths desert
Every letter I draw, Im mind stepping above the peasents


theres just too many quoteables in this piece, it alll ill, nice topic, nice immagery, nice flow, nice vocab.

this was probs one fo the best pieces i senn in open mic for a long time.
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