hmm....
Alright..
Your vocab was low, but seein how you were just lettin stress go, thats fine. Your flow was actually really good, i followed it very well. I dunno if i enjoyed reading this or not, haha, i guess i'd have to be in a bad mood to really enjoy this. I've heard the song, and you go along with it pretty good. Just up your vocab and you'll be allset.

Overall- 8/10