this felt like it was a pretty deep peice that you put emotion into, you kept to the subject well, but i thought it was a bit depressin, i didn't like the hook much but it linked in well with the topic, quite a simple structure but it suited it,but i would have introduced some good multis but all in all pretty decent ......

can you hit this quick drop up plz...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88550