boo-ya! nice rhyme, wang, nice rhyme. i really liked yer 3rd and 4th lines the most (great rhyme scheme). here's my opinion: lay offa tha drugs, an lay some mo' insults(but i aint hatin).

ANYWAYZ---- YALL MFRS OUT THERE @ HOME-----
COME ON AN VOTE FO' ONE OF US- IT'LL BE GREATLY APPRECIATED!!!!! THANX, CATS