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Old 10-30-03, 11:21 AM   #5
Split-eyez
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nice piece... full of emotions, kinda played out topic but you did a good job. Nice flow and just an overall good read.
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Why did you cheat if you said you loved me and I capture your attention
Was she another part of the relationship you forgot to mention

I liked ya style too, like the things between brackets and stuff....
keep droppin, probs,
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