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Chrit obviously had a better flow... it was structured well
and thus led to an easily read verse...
came strong with some punches... some were unique, and
some were, well, played... but nice job on the hits... kept me
inthused...
Wordplay was very nice... I was really feelin the part about
"I dont usually eat pussy" lmao.. that cracked me up...
overall I rate your verse on a 1-10 scale... an 8 due to
some played punches... but nice drop.
Av- your structure wasnt as good as Chrits, but I could still follow
your flow... you didnt have too much for multies and such, but
it was still nice to read...
Punches- you rocked a shit load of original punches... very nice,
your a very creative person... some of your punches didnt really
make much sense, but a lot of them also hit pretty damn hard...
your wordplay was fucking outstanding... like your opener...
props^....
vote- Chrit... even though he threw a few played punches,
is original punches hit hard enough to take it, plus his structure
was a lil better... mad props on the wordplay to both on this...
^^^Props^^^
my bad... I didnt read the line for line vote rule...
but it wont let me vote anyway... so... take this for what its
worth... props to you two
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