Earning my keep by doing my voting...

Very interesting battle here.

Two very diverse styles and topics.

Props ta both.

Fgee

Long ass read, but ya kept it pretty entertaining.
Nonetheless, this was more of a horror story than a rap.
A good one, no doubt, I just thought your rhyme scheme was really off in places.
That hurt ya flow alot.
Nice complexity, good vocab utilized.
Spooky little ending, but I could joke around and say, "I'd bodyslam a ghost bitch!"...
Kinda was left with that sort of impression.
Could be serious/could be jokey.
Overall: 6/10

Calda Merda

This was a damn good format and read.
Nothin jokey about it.
Full force with emotion, loss, pain, and wonder.
And the flow was borderline sick...
I never missed a beat reading it.
The ending was a bit predictable though...
I knew as soon as I saw the "he beats me" line, that this chick was a goner.
One question...if ya loved her, why didn't you tell her so and have her stay with you?
Great closer...
This was a very ill piece.
Vocab, complexity, everything was off the hook.
Overall: 8/10

My vote obviously goes to Calda Merda

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