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Old 10-30-03, 04:52 PM   #4
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yea talon you got some skill in this shit,good vocab,good structure, well laid out, i thought you came on point completely,erythin seemed to be in order,very ill{BROOKLYN IN THA HOUSE AND REPPIN TO THA FULLEST]crazy b:your flow was kinda choppy,rhyme scheme lacked a bit, and your structure was a bit off too,your point got across though,try uppin your flow,other than that this collab was ill.keep droppin tha hotness.~1~
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