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Old 10-30-03, 09:45 PM   #11
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Chrit=Using 3 points of view in your piece, really showed more talent than any limitations. It Shows how your expanding your writing skills. The atheist part was, to me, the strongest part in the piece. Kept it nice and strong, consistent throughout.

Auspicious: You came out straight forward. Didn't try anything new, kept with the formula, but it worked out for you. You had a strong piece here, it may not have been as creative as Chrit's but it had some stronger points in it then the new approach.

With that said though, Auspicious almost took this one. The topic got a bit too caught up in itself, and you lose any interest by the end of your first verse. Also your hooks weakened it. Chrit put out 3 consistent verses, which had no major weaknesses, except for the fact his flow was too simple and needed a bit more complexity.
Nice battle and big ups to both...
Vote-Chrit.
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