alright first things first young. honestly I think u got some potential in ya, that verse was alot betta then ur last with some better vocab, some ok wordplay and some good multi's and ya flow was intact throughout most of the rhyme to.

So who the ho be?/ you can play like it’s me/ but what a girl doing with extra large condoms at 14…
But you blew it off cuz it was nothin/ until you found out she was clutching them rubbers/ when she fucking ya cousins…

I particularly liked those lines. I was feelin it.

but in my opinion I say ur in man, shit was aigh't but for standard procedures here we gotta see what everyone else thinks of ur rhyme so wish ya the best of luck bro. peace.

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