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Originally posted by lil_roxy
i guess its anotherrelationship poem, but i writ it wit a different style den my norm...post ya thoughts
as I witness tha rain, falling from tha clouds
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I am sorry, I got this far and couldnt go on. An introduction to a poem must be exceptional to overthrow the effects of poor grammar and the use of internet lingo.. It saddens me that there is such lack of respect for the english language in todays society.. There is a time and place for using such abbreviations, and if you really want to encapture the reader, then this isnt it.
Yes, poetry can take any form, and poetry is poetry to the author... but its important to take pride in your work.. because if you don't, chances are the reader won't either.