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Originally posted by Born To Kill
LM, ya rhyme scheme seemed a bit off this time...
Format kinda sloppy.
But ya punches and personals were good enough this time.
Split got tha multi's and maybe complexity...
But the punches, personals, and battle belonged ta LM...
Close though, real close.
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damn took tha words right out of my mouth but both of ya should work of flow and structure |