I'm feeling the same thing, man...

Lightning tore this up with real emotion, great vocab, and a good, strong rhyme scheme...
I really found no flaws other than the fact that he lost his chick in the verse.

8.75/10

Feeble, not sure what you were getting at with this. I loved the opening line, that was dope as all hell...
But, just didn't see how ya related the rest of it to the topic.
Ya vocab was a bit simple, aside from that, and kinda missing the topic...
This was a very ill piece.

7.5/10

White Lightning

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