not a bad peice...
potent had good structure, as always... his vocab was
really good, and the content was definately there... it
was a really nice drop that you had....

Ruthless- your shit flowed alright... you should put more
content into your verse so readers can visualize the shit you
say... plus it would help you on your structure... other than that
you had a pretty ill verse... very nice to read...

Props^^^

can yall hit up my open mic:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6419#post876419