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Ya Mama's Favorite
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You got a top notch flow on this even though you should leave out all those dashes and spaces and shit..I knwo you strying to seperate so poeple can follow the lflow but it make your shit amerurish and it acually breaks up the flow of your piece.......
Your rhyme sceam and vocab is good and your subject is cool but you kind of stray awa from keeping the topic at the forfront, you started off strong then started to fade away at the end. This still was pretty good though, your flow is your best asset.
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