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Old 10-31-03, 02:06 PM   #4
whitelightning
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That was two very good verses from both...

Chrit:

Good approach and solid. I liked the different points of view..it was absolute money...Good solid rhyme scheme and good flow.8/10

Aus:

This verse is ver well done. The story really gripped me...got the edge from Chrit on that aspect. Flow had some trouble spots in the beginning but you overshawoed it by coming strong in the middle and end. Good Verse. 8.5/10

Vote: Aus.

Solid battle. This is what you look for in a championship.
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