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Old 10-31-03, 02:08 PM   #10
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Lightning Is Stepping Up.. Thats For Sure
Easy Read, Good Flow And I Re-Read It
Over And Found How It Should Be To Your
Ex, And It Went Along Nicely.. Getting Better.

Feeble.. Multis And Flow Overwhelmed This
Piece, Yet The "On Topic" Aspect Is What I
Questioned In Sum Spots. Not Bad Here
Just Thought You Could Have Done Better
With A Different Topic.

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