Like he said it was a little like 8 Mile:

Strengths: You had a good solid flow to it.
You also had some pretty good meaning.

Weaknesses: Try to make the line even and multi a little bit more.

Advice: ^^ and try to pick a really cool topic, a really orginal one.

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