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Old 10-31-03, 03:19 PM   #1
Phate
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i always have fucked up thoughts poppin in my head while composin beats....today i decided to write em down n post em.
any/all feedback welcome..pz

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time ta gather round n watch me put silence to ya sounds
cus i'm about to lay ya down like ali snatchin way ya crown

ya'll mc's r like a clowns roamin round the carnival
rhymes unglier than carneys, i'd rather battle the stuffed animals

u should keep the secret of ya skills closer than caramel fills
cus they sound more cloned bills at federal paper mills

don't try ta battle me, i'll leave u labelled 'Rap Unemployed'
n paranoid like athletes on fake undetectable steroids

instead of wastin ur time, go grab a spoon from the kitchen counter
n go slurp your boyfriedns nuts for like the next half hour

this is just a warnin for any fake mc about to spit
i got a big hole in my ass waitin for ya ta marinade ur tongue wit
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