Chrit-nice imagery and creativity...over all a very nice piece...and excellent idea with the 3 points of view...

Auspy-also a nice story going on...nice structure...although ya verse wasn't quite as creative as Chrit's...I was feeling ya flow better...multi'z were good...

this was a very close battle but I think I'ma have to give the vote to Auspy...

so...

vote-Auspicious