WL is gunna get a shot sometime...this peice was good...
strong story... hit the topic well...
vocab...the way u put it was good...flow was tight...
deff. 1 of your stronger points...
good job


feeble...i couldn't get into to it much...u've done better...
it was decent but not enuff 2 win...
some catchy shit...but most seemed to just fill ur story...
u finished better than u started too...


vote=WL