ok well since eveyone has summed it all up/..... i will do it again

WL i was really feelin your verse.. .it had good structure and rhyme scheme... the flow was there the whole time... and it was a GREAT story line

I didnt like how you came on this one feeble... i dont like the multi topic topical even though it is original i guess... you just didnt reach the bar that WL set with his verse

Vote - WhiteLightning