This was from the heart..

I can relate to this piece, and I'm sure can everyone else can too (unless youre a net nerd with no life, like Chrit, then you couldnt).

I liked how you worded it, it flowed real smoothly. I could picture someone spitting it in audio, to a laid back warm beat. I've written shit like this for my girl before, its a good way to get in with them when they hear a song you wrote for them. They melt over that shit.

You should record this shit and let her listen to it.

Anyways, nice piece

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