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This shit was short... lyrically, it wasnt so impressive. Some corny shit in there. Lmao@ Bob Saget. That cat is so fruity.

I guess it was a good message, I can feel you hating on these emcees and singers and shit poppin that mindless club hit garbage... but lately that seems to be the idea behind a lot of underground writing.

I did like the " its my world like Bobby" line... havent heard that before, lmao@ bobby's world show haha

I guess the only advice I can give you is to keep writing and try audio, once you start spitting in audio and practice youll automatically get better at text. Because text is only the first step in making an actual song. Dont let these net nerds confuse you and make you think that by writing a good song lyrically that youre an emcee.

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