to be honest i didnt like WL's verse
it seemed kind of hollow
and the begining didnt rhyme at all (first verse)
seemed like you were trying to hard to use good vocab...just didnt capture me on this one

feeble
i dont like you...at all
but i think you won this not that it will count for anything cos WL has about 8 votes
u seemed to put some heart into it and i liked your scheme alot better
just a better verse from all aspects except vocab wise....and a good little twist at the end

it wasnt a great battle
both need a fair bit of work but i vote feeble