good battle

illmental gets my vote however
the imagery and metaphors u used won this really
loved the clay on the plate line..overall u put down a solid verse which stayed on topic and was scattered with quotable lines

t-square

hate to vote against u again cos i enjoy reading your stuff......i dont think many ppl get your writing on here...(retadedness or inability to grasp your style...i dunno) but i liked ths verse alot
covered quite a few areas of the topic well and i liked the scheme contrary to whatppl think
some standout lines....but just couldnt edge it over ill mental