You write some good stuff. I liked how you put a different perspective on this. When I read the title I still didn't believe what was in parentheses. Proved me wrong, though.

The first stanza is what I liked most. I read it and pictured someone saying they are leaving you but still saying "I love you." Definately a twisted way to apologize. This seemed pretty clear with what was going on but I won't be suprised if I got it wrong. Highschool drop-outs miss even the simplest things.

How you broke it up into different parts was good. Made it easier to follow than the long paragraph type thing. Easier on the eyes, I guess? I dunno. You keep getting better. Kind of suprising. Ok, I'll stop before I make this reply too long.