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Old 11-01-03, 01:03 PM   #8
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audible you have a choppy flow and you abused the 12 line bar limit....


This Liars Vexed.....Aquired Text Are Wired And Flexed And Why Must I Face These Minor Vets?/
Bullets Hit Your Spine Or Chest....It's Done For You Cuz Your Getting Fucked Over Tha Net Like CyberSex//
^ Good On The Multis But A Played Concept, Why Do I Feel Live I've Seen This Before?

Cuz You'll Think I Had Church Instruments Tha Way I Play With Ya Organs//
^ sick line

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-Brixton-
This Chumps Rhymes Are Explicit?...There Damn Near Plausible,
Nobody Takes Note Of His Shit...So They Gotta Be In-Audible.
^ Origional and Ill

Coz They Ain't Fired Punches...Jus Made Up,Old Tale Hunches,
Tryin To Feed Of Ma Wakest Line,Like Pot-Heads On The Munchies.
^ LMAO.. funny but not that strong

D.Mindz Sure To Be Crumbling,So The Wakest Of Them I'm Humbling,
Makin Sure I Leave Humpty...Bone Dead & Lyrically Tumbling.
^ OHHHH (thats a wrap)



vote= -Brixton-


Why?

Because....

Structure-Brixton
Flow-Brixton
Punches-Tie
humor-audible
vocab-Brixton


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