Yo i like that beat kid, but it just seems like yer off that beat, not rhythem wise, but more attitude, demeaner, you need to rip a lil' harder to that beat, more energy (not crazy), just more confident energy and also no lyrics really made me say damn, that also comes with a tighter delivery, good luck, and check out some of my shit in the audio battles and song section. My page to the cuts is below, check the threads first so you can give some feedback. 1

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