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Old 11-01-03, 08:21 PM   #11
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guess what???

dizastur : put it this way you had no sense of flow
al yo shit wa fukked up
it aint even make snese like this for ex:

imma hit~this~bitch and throw him a punch~for~lunch//
his moms tits~i~hit, this dude crunches~his~bunches//

like dude that aint ake no snese

hitz:

this was a ok verse it wasnt the best i senn from a noob but it was ok

the part i like the bbest was the end

you beatin me thats fictionary,
get off your ass and get a dictionary


like that guy said advantagous is a word



so whe win is going to hitz