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Old 11-01-03, 09:26 PM   #6
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Nice, very nice.

Strengths-Deep, very deep, I like that, the wordplay was pretty good to, flow was hot.

Weakness-Nothing really, I read it 2 times, right now I can't see anything wrong with it, make it longer for more effect.

Overal-Very Very Nice, props.
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