your flow worked well, and you had a nice structure.... you just need to elevate on the quantity and quality of the actual rhyming words, and the vocab.... but ill give this 7/10, it was one of the most creative things ive ever heard in an open mic.... lol its people like you who're gonna lead hip hop into the future :P

ps. im tired of hearing bling bling guns this guns that club this club that on the radio.... a keystyle about chicken? genius