Strengths- Flow was on-point. Nice lyrics from both, deep shit. I love readin the shit that is deep and has a meaning to it.

Weaknesses- On the contrary, like KFC said, if this piece was meant to be deep, you need to work on the depth. It wasn't as deep as i'm sure it could've been.

A.T. - I loved this bar.

When I die, I want people to remember me for a number of things,
first off as a father, cause I love all the happiness that my baby brings,

Sounds like something Kweli would say. Nice. Dao, you came nice too dog, I was feeling AT's verse a lil more tho.

Overall- Me like.

-Formula