This piece seemed more like a rap or freestyle verse than a poem, but i was feeling the topic and attempt
the rhyme was simple, and i prefer more complicated things
i think it would've been better if it was longer
but this was ok,
keep elevatin

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."