I agree with self, it did seem like a poor attempt of a battle verse in some parts
I think you tried to relate the title in a way thats not relevant to the piece
The rhyme was simple, structure was ok, but the content was weak, it didnt appeal to me much
but it made me think of how people subconsciously hate; judge before they get to know a person, i dont know if that was what you was trying to get out ( i don't think it was)
but overall this was an ok piece
keep elevatin

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."