nice piece right here, i felt it
"Because tainted words never sounded so pure
Than when they purged those lips so sure
And it seemed they were destined to be my cure
But they weren’t…"
^ i liked that right htere and the first part as well

but it seems as if you took a slightly different road with the last two parts; a sort of change of mind, i thought it was going somewhere else.. but it didtn take away much from the piece as a whole

i liked it, nice drop
keep elevatin

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
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the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."