when this first started i didnt really know where it was gonna lead me, so it got me interested to wait and see, and it kept building up to the main point. i liked how you drew out the childs peaceful life before the war started. also i like the fact that you never even said what kind of war it was what happened in it who won whatever, just kept it home, in the family. i thought this was a well written piece, and showed mad emotion.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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