In all realness, i liked this piece, real hot
strange but str8

"How is your Jesus Christ hanging?"
everything leading up to that line, for me, made your mentality clear..your view on the technicalities, confusions and misconceptions that live... emotionally you was also portrayed.. you made me (the reader) get a good sense of you all around
i like how that can be connected into topics you speak about in what you write


"Women fall at my feet, you'd think it's desire
But I am a creep! I'm just using this trip wire"
^ i liked this part right here, it was funny but then it showed that maybe you use words or material things to draw women in and make them want you or make it seem that they do, or you put a front on to make it look like that to others
i like the double meaning here

um... i guess that's all
NICE PIECE for real

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."