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Old 11-02-03, 12:04 AM   #4
saltheking
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Cuz i'll be making 20 bones per album while u sellin um for free
^ my first read thru, and sorry dawg thats giving em away but its aight...

right right, nice lul keystyle from a cat...
you could elevate somewhere from here....
u came solid...in that it rhymed and u had some okay stuff, that roy jones thing is played as well as the ohhhh but u had them...in semi original locations....

Cuz before u fags started walkin, u had to learn to crawl
^playedness....

improve on this:
vocab...
thats really what i want, and some metas and shit...

u did good, this was a aight, for the circumstance...

keep dropping and going up and shit...

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hey you!
your worthless like pre-owned autos...
hahaha

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