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Mr ice, tryna Skittle with the elite? Show me your best trick and ill give ya a treat /
Im'a leave you wet and runny like digested chinese food turned to excrete // *
^ That Was Gay LOL

Cuz as soon as I grab the mic I be leavin all the voters with snickers /
Your overplayed lyrics have been posted more than politicians campaign stickers //
^ SICK!

Cuz iceman if I built you a stool, you still couldn't stand at my level /
And dawg im gonna burn your whole verse like im the god damn devil //
^ LMAOOOO humerous~

Dawg whats your crew man, cuz overthrowing a government well thats a revolution/
It must be because you are always overthrown because this is your execution //
^^^^ Good

The only time you will ever have a real spit is when your in your room jerking /
So you just better go update your dig because [i]youre[/] the latest merking // **
^ Bad coding

Advise: take out the choppy flow. //< - - and / <- -
and get rid of the stars, work on structure..

other then that your doing pretty good!

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ice
... my home boi!



this dude gets “thanks” for “giving” head once a year..that shit is annual...
he beat off 8 times in 1 day...now he calls himself the king of manual...
^ Mathematical.. shows your intellignece~

dominator is like a retard wit no hands...hes incapable of throwin punches...
damn right he dominates...he fucks faggots in bunches......
^ thats a bit played (think i saw that b4 but its koo)

dominator says he has all kinds of flow cuz he collects piss in mens urinals...
U HERB<--------look i just hit that bitch wit a personal....
^^^ OHHHHHH NOO LoL

u dyslexic faggot quit tryin to use big words that can barley come out ya mouth...
dominator is always on his knees suckin dick...now he thinks hes from the dirty south...
^^ Ill

u claim to be an ill textee....thats hard to believe considering u can hardly read....
like a baby born allergic to water.........you never had a chance to succeed...

^^ Good


Advise: juse more wordplay and multis.. u were good!


vote= ice

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