Wow. This was seriously awe inspiring. I mean, all those different lines had some serious mind expanding thoughts to them.


You’ll trip on my lashes
And fall into the intellectual lake

Your condensed mind
Will selfishly expand
To the shape of my body

Your paternal thoughts
Will overcome the truth
b/c you don’t understand


Tripping over ones lashes. Got the image that the person you are speaking to is really really small. And then falling into an intellectual lake, that got me feeling that your eyes are made of liquid and inside them is held knowledge. And then condensed mind expanding in your body, that makes me think the person you are talking to is someone of ignorance who takes possesion of your body. And the word paternal, that got me thinking that the person you're talking to is your mother or father or a care taker of yours.

I mean I loved this piece. The whole thing got me thinking of demon possesion, but I can see past that at least. I really loved this.

~Islam~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.