Personally, I think this would have been great if it had some real good punchlines in it, and give that battle verse appeal to it.

Anyway... you ever listen to the song "Strange Famous Mullet Remover" by Sage Francis? It's a good song. In one point of the song this guy is all talking "And I don't like anybody touching me. If any of you homos touch me... I'll kill you." Well I got the feeling that the tone that guy was speaking in, was the entire tone of this peice. Just imagining some guy slowly talking with anger in his voice and a pointed finger.

Thing is, I just want to know why you hate me so much. Especially since you don't know me.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.