I thought this was a hot piece...... you astounded me by writing a rap about kuntucky fried chicken, and you've done it again.... this flow works very well, and your vocab is considerably better than before... you just need to work on your actual rhymes.... add some multis in, and vocab + wordplay still needs some work..... your internals work great though, and the whole piece flows well.... and your very creative - i'll keep looking for your open mics

7.5/10

Somebody check out my open mic, "Mind Theory", please